Iíve made a few revisions on the Black Doll. Nothing major (yet). Just a few grammar and spelling errors that I missed the first time around.
Iím still pondering the fate of this story. Should I put up on blocks in the yard for some extensive reworking or just leave it as is? If I rewrite it, what needs work? Iíd like to maybe expand Vivian Thelemaís character a bit, perhaps connect her more directly to the Knights Templar, possibly in a historical context with the Doll, which would require showing more of the Dollís history. That could be fun. Also, Iím thinking of getting a little more into Uncle Rudolphís dubious past, make his unacceptable predilections a lot stronger (and thus, creepier).